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Victor Lima:
"I thought that all four pictures were very good. I chose Christoph's
picture because of the subtlety of the danger he depicts in his photograph.
Seeing the man in the wheelchair through the Mercedes Benz sign actually
made me fear for him. There is a sense of desperation that is not present
in the other pictures. I thought the other three pictures were sort of
static, in the sense that something already happened, but Christoph's
picture shows something about to happen."
Dale E. Miller:
"The Döpke print is a good 'practical sense' kind of image, the scene of
bathroom is interesting with a lot of energy with colors, lighting and
composition - in spite of the fact the subject is dead ! Brüggemann's
dog is difficult to take as vicious, but the dog's left hind
paw being off the ground makes it more energetic.
Müller has used a well known symbol with positioning against a handicapped
person to make a statement that you can play with many ways, i.e. against the
auto maker, in sympathy for the victim, or just for the sport of running over
people in wheel chairs ! (I really am just kidding.)
My vote for winner goes to Döpke because of the colors and 'feel' of the whole
thing."
Stephan Busch:
"Matthias' Bild ist der Schocker! Leicht und elegant
zwirbelt sich die hochvoltige Leitung hinab, stiftet
Verderben und gibt den Blick frei auf ein unschuldiges
Stück Seife, das in Harmonie mit dem düster-blauen
Rasierwerkzeug (US-Imperialisten-Wegwerfmodell) am
Rande des Geschehens plaziert wurde."
Torsten Weggen:
Chooses Christoph, "weil ich Mercedes-Fahrer bin, und es liebe, Fahrradfahrer..."
Len Pearson:
"There are two I like. Matthias' photo of the woman in the tub
shows the danger passed. The fear is gone, a thing of the past.
Christoph's photo shows the danger present. You can feel anxiety,
and I hate to say it, but I felt a little humor in it also.
Christoph, in my opinion, is clearly the winner."
Markus Ackermann:
"Das Bild von Matthias ist was Komposition, technische
Ausführung, aber auch
Aussage und Motivation angeht, mit Abstand das Beste. Ralfs Hund
landet knapp geschlagen auf dem zweiten Platz, die anderen beiden
konnten mich schliesslich nicht ueberzeugen."
Archie Anz:
"This would be a fantastic picture to illustrate the dangers
of using an electrical appliance while bathing. There are
warnings posted on electrical appliances, but this photograph
would really get the point across."
Daria Zakharova:
"I liked Matthias' picture most for colors and composition.
I thought Christoph's idea was really great, but I didn't like the
execution of this idea. There is
not enough color in the picture.
Ralf's picture is very cute. The dog looks dangerous indeed.
However, to me the composition was not sophisticated enough."
Adam Tuttle:
"Fantastic juxtoposition of what we all fear! The vision of the woman
is very disturbing I definitly feel danger from this. The long depth
of field adds all the more feeling to an already 'heavy' photo.
Good shot!"
Richard Bingham:
"I particularly liked [Matthias' picture] for its imaginative use of the
wide angle lens. If I had to nominate a second place, then
Christoph's was also excellent, but a bit more obscure in meaning."
Frank Heggen:
"To see a blood-thursty dog on the street reminds me of
how dangerous the daily-life is becoming. The danger to me is
not necessarily
the dog, but the 'owner' of the dog. If you can't be safe on the
street, where is it safe then? The photo is excellent."
Joan A. Hansen:
"I thought the photos were creative. Matthias and Ralf's
photos had the best clarity. But Matthias' for shock
content was the most creative."
Pekka Lahtinen:
"What did I first think when I looked at the pictures?
Matthias: Can you really die that way? Electricity & bathtub is not
such a threat, is it? A strange bathroom she had: blue brick walls?
I'm fond of the way your picture "controls my eye", focuses
my attention - and this one does it alright. Ralf: Fake fake fake ... (sorry :)
The picture is alright. I just didn't feel the danger.
Splash the dog on the display so that it looks like attacking
THE VIEWER - and you win. Too bad you cannot accomplish
that in this kind of competition. Christoph:
Again, I like the way a picture focuses by attention -
and the 'Mersu'(as we say in Finland) logo mounted on a
vehicle (which you cannot see!) indeed is the instrument for
that. Axel: Hmm, yess-s, the rails trip off bicycle riders!
Fortunate Montreux (CH) and Thonon Les Bain (F)
residents -- here in Finland we have no icons for
such a threat, text only.
The winner here is Matthias Döpke, since his picture
works small on the left side of my screen --
should they have been hung on a wall, or shown
full-screen, then Christoph Müller might have
won my vote.
(Besides, in a small picture, the triangle red
warning text - hair dryer - girl's dead eyes works
just right, and the blue brick walls work to
frame that just right - not to forget the bright
yellow whatever. Good stilleben, dead, at a danger.)
"
Andrew Sellgren:
"Matthias: Outstanding management of your depth of field.
I also like the color composition and the cacophony of the yellow
soap. Ralf: From my own experience, I know how hard it is to get good
animal shots, so don't take this remark too seriously: Your
subject looks more curious than viscious. Christoph: It's a fascinating
composition. You've framed the
subject (victim?) quite well, placing his face beautifully.
My one critique would be about how dangerous this looks. True,
the subject looks anxious, but the background looks more like
a parking lot than someplace that a car might be going fast.
It would have seemed more dangerous if it had been taken on a
road that looked like high speeds would be the norm.
Axel: What is the warning supposed to indicate, anyway?
'Don't jump off bicycles'? They were all good shots."
Rachel Rinaldo:
"As an amateur photographer, I think Spontax is a terrific
idea. I really like the way you think up your own contests, and
then just go out and do it.
Anyway, my personal favorite in the 'Danger' competition is Ralf
Bruggemann's 'Mean Dog.' It's a terrific shot, I think, because
of the original angle, and the almost surreal, painterly use of
color.
Keep up the good work."
Adriano Rampini:
"By the way: An accident like the one in Axel's picture happened to
me once (but I only broke my arm and didn't die as you
probably noticed!)"
Pascal Gauthier:
"I like the glitering geometric perfection, suggesting
intensity and precision; the hopeless target looking
back on its awaiting fate. Also, turning a commercial
symbol into an artistic one is typical of pop art,
which I am fond of.
Matthias' 'I told you so' picture is the most gripping
though."
Tim Marquardt:
"Tough, but I just happen to love bulldogs. The only
threat that dog seems to offer however, is the danger of getting
a big, sloppy kiss!"
Martin Cooley:
"I liked the way color was used in both Matthias and Ralf. There is
a certain surreal feeling. I dont agree with Matthias's stated that we don't
live in dangerous times, I think we do and his subject matter points it out
clearly; the wettness of washing one's hair and the use of an electric hair dryer
just dont mesh. I also don't agree with Ralf that a dog is all that
dangerous. I chose Ralf because the dead body in the tub of Matthias' work made me
uneasy."
Judi Schwartz:
"When a photographer sets up a photograph by creating the scenario
using props such as the woman in the bathtub or the person in the
wheelchair, it is always harder to be convincing without the feeling
of the photograph being contrived. It is difficult to do this successfully
I feel that Matthias came close; but, went too far and complicated.
The image by Christoph was not so eye catching. I liked the idea;
but, felt the results were not impactful. As to the bulldog photo -
I think I have seen too many images along this line for it to be
of interest to me. As to the photograph by Axel, I applaud his
ability to take the ordinary (something that we see every day) and
turn it into a statement that is clear and succinct. The image works
on all levels of composition and technique."
Alexander Haines:
"Zwei Bilder kommen als beste in Betracht: Christophs und Matthias' Bilder.
Matthias´ Bild ist photographisch gesehen besser. Jedoch trifft das
Bild von Christoph GENAU das Thema ´Gefahr´: ein Rollstuhlfahrer, der vor
einem Autoverrückten flüchtet. Matthias hat dagegen nur die Situation
danach, als das Mädel schon tot ist, erfaßt. Aus diesem Grund
finde ich, daß der erste Platz eindeutig Christoph zusteht.
Anders wäre es gewesen, wenn Matthias genau den Zeitpunkt photo-
grafisch erfaßt hätte, als der Fön die Wasseroberfläche penetrierte."
Franklin C. McKay:
"The dog you could boot in the head and knock out!
The Mercedes picture doesnt have motion. Therefore, the car could be going
2km per hour and could stop quite easily.
The picture of the road doesnt reallt represent danger to me. The odds of
getting in a car accident are 1 in 1500. I'm sure there are more dangerous
things than that.
The hairdryer in the bathtub, well, as if? But, it seems to depict the most
danger out of the four.
I would have taken a picture of the 'REALLY' bad end of town where the
gangs hang out. Or of Mr. Bean. Because he is dangerous to the mind :)"
Marco Cagetti:
"Although it shows the consequences of not paying attention
to a danger rather than the danger itself, I liked
Mathias picture for its macabre and horror image...
and in such a common place as a bath...
How about some extra burns?"
Ron Edwards:
"As was the case in the last contest, all four photos
were very good and original. However, the bathtub
danger is definitely the most DANGEROUS!"
Josh Auzins:
"Great composition transforms this picture from just a
gimicky photo (high saturation, wide angle, naked girl)
into a great all around effort. Bravo!"
Hugh Arndt:
"All of you have depicted the topic with your shots, however
Ralf not only showed danger in his picture but it also
showed danger in taking it."
Axel Behnke:
"Kribbelnde Wasserspiele:
In bezug auf das gestellte Thema sicherlich ein Volltreffer.
Dieses ist auch durchaus passend und dezent in Szene gesetzt (das
Wichtigste ist optisch in den Vordergrund gestellt). Die schauspielerische
Leistung der Hauptdarstellerin ist ebenso beachtlich (es war doch wohl
gespielt??). Beachtenswert auch die durchgängige Bildschärfe bei
den sicherlich nicht üppigen Lichtverhältnissen.
Ein Bild, das von seiner Aussagekraft deutlicher und ungeschminkter
sicherlich nicht sein könnte. Einer Veröffentlichung im Auftrage
des VDE würde sicherlich nichts im Wege stehen (vielleicht wäre es
denen aber auch schon wieder zu direkt und hart...).
Habe zwischen diesem und dem letzten lange geschwankt, bin dann aber
doch zu der Überzeugung gelangt, daß mir der alte
Pitbull-Beißer
am besten gefällt.
Die fotodramaturgische Umsetzung des Themas scheint mir hier trefflich
gelungen. Schon der Aufnahmewinkel und die damit gut in Szene gesetzte
Bedrohung durch diese häßliche Kreatur ist gut gewählt (war das die
letzte Aufnahe des Fotografen?). Das Bild hat Dynamik.
Darüber hinaus sind die farblichen Kontraste und die Schärfentiefe
sehr schön abgestimmt."
Britt May:
"So ist dieses allgegenwärtige Thema doch bei allen vieren
herausragend lebensnah getroffen, jedoch fiel meine Wahl auf Matthias
Bild, das in seiner Farbigkeit, durch den Blickwinkel der Aufnahme,
vor allem aber durch die 'Komposition'
unausweichbar in seinen Bann schlägt. Da kann so manch subtiles Magazin,
dass sich rühmt, phototechnisch den legendären Zeitgeist zu treffen, ein
Beispiel nehmen. Bravo!"
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